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I love this piece, overall it is very beautiful.

I love her expression, and soft color pallet. The roses are wonderful, but not too detailed where they draw away from the face. The hair is amazing , I am glad you have hints of the rose pastel colors in the hair, it gives it awesome depth, and the shadows in the hair aren't overwhelming.

The lips and the eyes are well done, however for the eyes I would like to see more of a hint of eyelashes (nothing to detailed, but more of a blurred hint). Directly under the notstils theres a smudge of grey/black that comes off a bit unflattering as it draws my eye directly there. I would lighten the nostils every so slightly and maybe try a bit of color under the nose so it doesnt seem so black.

I will definately have to favorite this piece and pick through you gallery though. You are quite talented, and your color choice just makes me feel warm and fuzzy. :happybounce:
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Keyade Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013   Digital Artist
Omg thank you so much for writing this thoughtful critique, I really appreciate it :iconaawplz:

And thank you too for the suggestions, I have to admit that I forgot to paint the eyelashes LOL....and I've always wondered what was wrong with the area below the nose, now I know! I think I'm gonna edit this painting a little according to your advice, thank you so much for letting me know :) Btw, glad you liked my work! :iconbrohugplz:
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artofcarmen Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:happybounce: I'm glad I could help.
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